2011年8月10日星期三

Random Act of Kindness

Outline

P1 -A conflagration was happen at last Monday.

P2-Mei Ling went back from her school.She saw some smoke float to the sky.

P3-She followed the smoke to find out the the place where the smoke had been float.

P4-She went telephone box and make a call to fire station.

P5-The fire was put out.The girl had been safe.She carry the girl to go home.


   A conflagration was happen at last Monday.The conflagration was saw by a girl,Mei Ling.
   That day,Mei Ling was went back home from school.At the same time,she saw some smoke float to the sky.When she saw it,she felt very decided.

   After that,she followed the smoke way to find out the place where the smoke had been float.When she followed walked and lastly she had reached Taman Kundang.

   When she reached there she saw a house was burning quickly.She heard a girl was shout "Help!Help!Help!"loudly.

   When Mei Ling saw it the first thing that she does was went to the nearly telephone box to make a emergency call.She called to the fire station and told all the happening to the fire station' s people.After5 minutes,the fireman was reached at the conflagration location.
   Finally,the fire was put out and the girl had been safe by the fireman.Mei Ling was carried the girl to her house and attend to the girl for a short while.

Random Act of Kindness

OUTLINE
P1- A conflagration was happen at last monday.
P2- Mei Ling went back from her school. She saw smoke float to the sky.
P3- Secondly/Furthermore/Besides that, she saw a house burning and heard a voice from the house.
P4- She went to the telephone box and make a call to the fire station.
P5- The fire was put out.The girl had been safe and Mei Ling taken the girl to back home



   A conflagration was happen at last morning. This conflagration was saw by a girl,Mei Ling.

   That day,Mei Ling was went back home from the school.At the same time,she saw some smoke float to the sky.When she saw it she felt very decided.

   After that,she follow the smoke way to find out the place where the smoke had been float.When she follow the smoke walked and lastly she had near the Taman Kundang.

   When she reach Taman Kundang she saw a house was burning with quickly.She heard a girl's voice from the burning house.The girl was shout "Help!Help!Help!"loudly.

   When Mei Ling saw it, the first thing that she does was went to the nearly telephone box to make a emergency call.She called to the fire station and told all the thing that happen to the station's people.After 5 minutes,the fireman was reached at conflagration location.

   Finally,the fire was put out and the girl had been safe by the fireman.Mei Ling was carried the girl to her house and attend to the girl for a short while.

Random Act of Kindness

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